The telephone idea was great. I had a couple of concerns. First, it was not completely clear to me that you were talking to Nancy Pelosi. Second, the ending needs work. Your anger comes so abruptly, it seems contrived. It would be better to end with something like (slowing down and gradually more emphatic), "Nancy, only you can get impeachment on the table. S o. g e t i m p e a c h m e n t o n t a b l e n o w!!! (No expletive needed.)

The phone conversation is a good idea and will probably have young people watching as well. Needs to be shorter with better sound quality and maybe a little more of the energy displayed at the end. I also like the "serial killer" comment. Could use a few comments about how Cheney's actions have affected our lives to bring home the message and maybe having to hang up prematurely because they detect that someone else is listening.